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Monday, July 25, 2011

The Bloody Marys - Prologue

I'm finally back with a new story. I know it's been a while but had to come up with a really good story to engage my readers. I had been trying to figure what my next story should be about, whether it should be a sequel or an entirely new story. I had gotten a lot of good reviews for my story Friday the 13th and so I decided I'll try my hand at some more sci-fi by writing a sequel - make that a prequel. 

Have to thank Smriti and Phoenix who were the ones who were really keen on me doing more sci-fi. I hope this is something along the lines of what you were looking for in my story. 
I shall be trying out something new with this story. I had been informed by a few of my readers that they don't get updates when I put a new chapter up so this time I'm uploading each chapter as a different post. I hope you all get the updates now.

Enjoy the read.


Prologue


The Prophecy


As the moon draws closer to the earth. A multi colored star will appear near it. The waves of the oceans will start frothing. For 5 hours this shall take place. On this day, in 5 pre-selected households around the world, 5 girls would be born, each born an hour apart.

They'd be born through unnatural births. Born in blood. Each given a special gift that no other on earth possess. The gift that would be used to fight the undead.

The Bloody Marys - Chapter 1

25 years ago:

In a lantern lit room in an ancient citadel a group of 5 hooded figures gathered around a fire. They stand on 5 spots in the ground. A sixth spot remains vacant. The robes are black and cover their faces.

Suddenly a figure appears from the shadows and walks to the only vacant spot left. The figure is the only one not covered with a hood even though she wears a black robe similar to the others. The figure is a woman in her 30s. She is known as the Librarian. Her silky black hair falls down her shoulders.

The people gathered here this night are the last remaining members of the secret society called the Kryptos. The Kryptos are the protectors of the future, lead by the Librarian.

[Librarian - She is the keeper of the book of Nebulon the prophet.]

The Librarian addresses the gathering. 'People you know why I have gathered you all here today.'

One of the hooded figures known as Reaper replies 'Yes. Tonight is the night they are born.'

[Reaper - The name given to the assassin. He is a trained killer chosen to protect the Librarian.]


'What do we do Librarian?' says another hooded figure known as Lady Mantis.

[Lady Mantis - Another assassin famous for seducing her male enemies and then killing them. Another bodyguard of the Librarian]

'The 6 of us shall go to the 5 locations and make sure no harm befalls them during or after birth.'

'Do you really think the prophecy will come true?' replies Scientist

[Scientist - The man who invented the transporter that is used to teleport people to different locations]

'The book of Nebulon has not been wrong. They will be born tonight when the Moon is closes to Earth. They will be born through bloody births.' says Destructor

[Destructor - He is the demolition expert in the group.]


'Healer you know what you have to do once we have them?' asks the Librarian.

'Yes. Just make sure we get them without any harm.'

[Healer - She is the doctor who can treat almost all the ailments known to man.]


'Fine so now that we are all clear and in accordance shall we make a move. Scientist are you ready?'

'Yes let's make a move.'

The 6 of them walk up to the transporter. The Librarian keys in the coordinates.

A flash of light and poof a cloud of smoke.

The Bloody Marys - Chapter 2

Deep in the Amazon forest a figure runs. He jumps over logs increasing his speed with each step he takes. He reaches a village and runs to the center of it. The entire village has gathered there. In the center of the gathering is a pier with a naked pregnant woman lying on it.

Suddenly a man with a headdress made of porcupine quills comes to the center just as the running figure stops near the pier. He drops the bag he has slung over his shoulders and says in an ancient dialect 'Witch Doctor I have brought what you asked for.'

The witch doctor walks up the bag and and pulls out a snake known as the Jararaca. The Jararaca is a pitviper and one of the most poisonous snakes in the Americas. The witch doctor takes a sheepskin bag and draws the venom out of the snake. He then drapes the snake over the woman. She yells as her contractions start getting stronger. As she starts pushing the witch doctor cuts of the head of the Jararaca and pours the blood on her face. He then slits the snake down its body and let's the snakes blood cover her body.

One of the village women tends to the pregnant woman and helps her with the delivery of the baby. The witch doctor then let's the snakes blood envelope the baby as it is pulled out.
The witch doctor then dribbles some of the venom into the mouth of the mother. Her gums and skin start bleeding. Her eyes start to hemorrhage. Her body goes into shock just as the witch doctor slits her throat.

He then takes the sheepskin bag and moves to the baby. He dips a quill from his headdress into the venom and takes it to the baby's lip. Just then there is a flash of light and a lot of smoke.


When the smoke finally clears the whole gathering is in shock. The baby no longer is in the hands of the village woman but in the hands of a cloaked figure. The Librarian comes forward and talks to the witch doctor in an unknown dialect.

'Be gone you evil minion. You may fool these innocent people but you can't fool us.'

The witch doctor looks at the Kryptos and starts laughing. He let's out a shrill scream just as his skin starts falling off and he transforms into a menacing looking zombie. More shrill screams emanate from around them.

The Kryptos turn around and see a number of zombies appear.

The witch doctor continues 'Give me that baby and I shall spare you.'

'Grabel you can tell Veyrona that we are not going to let her succeed. We will not let you get the girls.' says the Librarian.

[Veyrona is the self proclaimed Queen of the zombie tribe Xandia (known as the daytime wanderers). Grabel is a member of the tribe Krux (the shape shifters) - they are the spawns of Veyrona and the King of Krux. The two tribes joined forces to take on the Krptos and had reduced the number of Krptos to 6]

Grabel laughs. 'You stupid mortal. You think these babies are going to save you? We will kill you now.' He signals to the other zombies and they converge.

Just then there is a bright light and a cloud of smoke. When the smoke clears the area where the Kryptos were standing is empty.

The Bloody Marys - Chapter 3

In Bakaara Market in the city of Mogadishu in Somalia an eerie silence prevails. No sounds of shop keepers arguing with their customers. No guns being shot of by gun dealers testing their weapons.

At that moment a flash of light and smoke suddenly appears. The Kryptos look around them and take in the surroundings.

'This does not feel right' says The Destructor.

'Yeh I agree. Reaper, Mantis scout the premises. I hope we are not too late.' says The Librarian. 
'Switch on your comexes' she adds 

[Comexes are communication devices that the scientist has created. They are invisible to the naked eye. The mic is a skin patch on the throat. The hearing device is on the teeth. Vibrations on the tooth are transmitted to the inner ear drum as sound. The Comexes are many years ahead of the technology.]

The Reaper and The Mantis take off in different directions to do a surveillance of the area.

'Oh for the love of humanity' squacks the comexes with the voice of The Reaper.

'Oh no. You got to come see this' says The Mantis. 

The Kryptos rush to where Reaper and Mantis are and they all gasp at the same time.

'I think we are a little late' says The Scientist.

'What the hell happened here?' says The Healer.

'Looks like a damn hurricane ripped through here' adds The Destructor.

The Kryptos look around them. There are dead bodies all over. Blood spewing from the bodies telling the Kryptos the deaths were recent. There are limbs hanging from doorways. Entrails strewn across the streets.

'The entire village. Veyrona has really done it' grimaces The Librarian.

Just then...swoosh booooom... A building in front of the Kryptos explodes. They immediately split up and turn towards the source of the rocket.

The Reaper is the first to spot the figure crouched near some rubble. He whispers into his comex.

'Nobody move.' He slips out his FX Lazer that was designed by The Scientist. 

[The FX Lazer gun which is a modified AK47 fitted with a powerful Lazer emitter. It can blow up a building from a range of over 2 miles and is electronically controlled with the help of an LCD screen. It has several operating modes.]

The Reaper adjusts the sight through the LCD screen until he gets a clear image.

'Uhmm. That's a human. I repeat target is a human. What do I do?' whispers Reaper into the comex.

'Are you sure?' replies The Librarian.

'Affirmative. All heat signals on my FX show him to be human' responds Reaper.

'Then stun him. We need to know what happened here.'

'Ok Librarian.'

Reaper adjusts a setting on his FX and targets the human and fires. The FX sends out a signal that hits the human and stuns him momentarily. The Healer at this moment rushes to the human to see if he is alright.

'His vitals are fine. Nice shooting Reaper.'

'Thanks Doc.'

The Healer takes out an injection and jabs into the neck of the human. The human suddenly let's out a huge breath and sits up looking at the Kryptos around him.

'You are humans' he says stunned.

'Yes we are' says The Reaper sarcastically.

'Zombies. Weird creatures. All over. Dressed like human.' Says the man rather disoriented.

'What is your name?' The Librarian asks the man.

The man grins. 'Valkyrie'

Suddenly the man transforms himself into a werewolf and leaps at the Librarian. As he is about to land on the Librarian he yelps and is thrown sideways. He lands on the side of the Librarian. He groans and moves his hand to his gut. He then looks at his hand and sees his blue blood.

The Reaper steps forward and puts a foot on Valkyrie pinning him to the ground at the same time pulling out a hunting knife lodged in the werewolf's gut. The Reaper twists the knife as he pulls it out making Valkyrie scream. He then looks at Valkyrie and asks 'Where is Lucius? What the hell really happened here?'

Valkyrie just grins at him. The Reaper twists the knife, pulls it out and jabs it back in extremely fast causing the werewolf extreme pain. The Reaper is about to do it again when Valkyrie shouts 'Lucius is in pursuit of the zombies. They got here before any of us and killed every last one of the humans. Lucius says they have the girl.' With that the Reaper removes the knife from Valkyrie and in the same instant pulls out a gun from under his robe and shoots Valkyrie and says 'Eat Silver Nitrate arsehole'


The Kryptos turn and go around the streets. The Librarian turns to the Scientist 'Find out where Lucius or the zombies are and quick. The rest of you comb the streets for survivors.'

Suddenly Lady Mantis silences everybody. They all stay still. Then they hear what Lady Mantis had heard. The 6 of them try to locate the sound. The Scientist quickly pulls out a triangle shaped device and taps the screen. A grey blue image of the terrain ahead pops up on the screen. He clicks the screen a few more times and the device starts vibrating. Within a second he points in a direction.

'There under the pile of rocks near that tree.'

They gasp at the sight before them. 'Born in blood she shall be. The second as the first death dealers shall be' The Librarian recites the verse from The Book of Nebulon that predicts the birth of the second girl. She walks up to the baby and picks her up.

She turns to the others. 'It is her. They've got the wrong girl.' 

The Bloody Marys - Chapter 4

A flash of light appears. 5 hooded figures appear in a clearing near a lake. The location - a small hamlet in Scotland. It is one of the remote lochs of Scotland where there are hardly any habitants.

'Aiye. Look who be here.' Says a voice with a heavy Scottish accent.

The 5 figures turn around to see a heavyset man with a scruffy beard grinning at them.

'McKinley. Good to see you old friend. Have you done what is needed?' Replies the Librarian.

'Aye me lassie. Where be my favorite Kryptos?' Replies McKinley looking at each of the Kryptos with a little disappointment in his eyes.

'The Healer is with the children. They need constant monitoring. She wished she could have been here too' replies the Librarian. 'Anyway McKinley. You know why we are here. Take us to her.'

McKinley turns and starts marching away towards the eastern part of the loch. The Kryptos follow him. They reach a run down house behind a clump of trees and McKinley stops. He looks around and turns to the Kryptos.

'Something is not right here people. Be on the look out' cautions McKinley.

McKinley knocks on the door and it is opened by a lady in her 30's. She smiles at McKinley and ushers them all in.

McKinley then asks her 'Where is the child?'

The lady leads them into a room where a mother lies on a bed with her baby in her arms. The mother looks up at the visitors. At the moment the Reaper motions everybody to keep quiet. He walks out of the room and crosses the passage way to a door on the other side. Just as he is about to open the door there is a scream from the bedroom. The Reaper opens the door as the Kryptos turn towards the mother and child to see them change form, just as the lady who opens the door does too.

'Shape shifters' scream Lady Mantis as she draws her FX. The same time McKinley draws a strange looking device and trains it onto the shape shifters and let's 2 blasts onto them just as they start to transform again.

'That makes sure they don't transform into anything else' screams McKinley as he pulls out his FX and aims it at one of the shape shifters. He takes out one just as Lady Mantis takes out another. The 3rd shape shifter runs out of the room towards the Reaper just as a shot is fired by the Destructor.

In the mean time the Reaper opens the door to find a woman tied up, bound and unconscious with a baby in her arms. Realizing the situation the Reaper grabs the baby and hands her to the Scientist and they run out of the house to avoid the firefight. As they get out they run into a number of shape shifters outside the house.

'Scientist take the girl and get her to the Healer now.' The Scientist turns around and runs back into the house. Just as the other Kryptos come out. The Librarian joins the Scientist and they head to one of the rooms and the Scientist pulls out his transporter and transports the both of them out of the place.
At the same time the remaining 3 Kryptos and McKinley engage the shape shifters in a fierce battle.

The Reaper suddenly takes out a small circular object and shouts out 'Guys take cover.'

He flings the object into the hordes of shape shifters and dives for cover. As he hits the ground the circular object turns blue and a circular lazer beam shoots out from it killing all the shape shifters around. The remaining shape shifters see the damage done and retreat.

McKinley gets up from behind his cover and turns to the Reaper 'I want one of those babies.'

The Reaper smiles and turns around. The Destructor takes out his transporter and the others gather around. A flash of light appears.

The Bloody Marys - Chapter 5

'Look what we've dragged in' says the Reaper as the Kryptos walk into their hideout.

The Healer looks up just in time to see McKinley walk in. She grins and runs up to him and flings her arms around him.

'Brother dearest. What the hell are you doing here?'

'Can't a man come see his little sister? Just because you're trying to save the world doesn't mean you're not my little sister anymore.'

'He would have been turned into human pulp if we had left him' says the Destructor laughing.

'That's enough people' interrupts the Librarian. 'We still have to save 2 more girls. Now that we have all greeted each other warmly we still have work to do. Reaper take Mantis, Destructor and McKinley with you and get the fourth girl and Scientist and I will go to the fifth.'

'No offense Librarian but McKinley and myself will be able to get the fourth girl. I think Mantis, Destructor and Scientist should go to the fifth while you stay here with the Healer' states the Reaper.

'I second that' adds the Mantis 'You need to be here. Like Reaper said, Destructor, Scientist and I should be able to handle the fifth.'

'Before we leave I want to ask a question to everyone. Has anyone noticed that at each birth there has been only one of the evil species there? Doesn't it seem odd that the others were not there?' Asks the Reaper.

'Yeh you're right. It's as though they are all working together.' Adds the Scientist.

'That means you all have to be careful. We don't know who else has joined them.' Cautions the Librarian. 'Go now.'

The Reaper looks at McKinley 'Well it's you and me old boy, you ready?' He pulls out his transporter.

'Who you calling old boy? And I'm more than ready to kick some other species arse.'

A flash of light and they disappear.

The Bloody Marys - Chapter 6

In a small town in south India in the state of Kerala a flash of light appears. Two figures walk away from the light. 

'If the coordinates are right then we should be 50 metres away from the village we have to go to' states the Reaper.

'Lead on fellow lead on' says McKinley.

The two of them weave their way through the small alley ways between the houses. They try to stay away from the roads as much as possible. Near the outskirt of the town in a small courtyard there is a commotion. 

The Reaper stops and pulls out his binoculars.

'Crocoserpents. This is not good for us' says the Reaper.

'What the hell are Croco-whatever-they-are?'

'Well these are mutants created by certain science experiments done in the kingdom of Krux. They are part snake and part crocodile infused into a human being' says the Reaper.

'Woah you have got to be kidding me' replies McKinley. 'But they're just creatures. We should be able to take them on easily right?'

'They are the worst of the enemies we've met so far. They are extremely smart, fast and powerful. They are fantastic shooters and can kill with a bite, a scratch or a swing of their tail. They were created by this guy called Icabard Shredder. The King of Krux's faithful scientist. The shape shifters we met in Scotland are part of his army as well. They are children of his union with Veyrona.'

'Well I'll be damned. So it is true that the zombies and the shapeshifters are together.'

'Yes McKinley. They were united long back when Krux married Veyrona. It was the only way they could defeat the Kryptos.'

'You mean you guys have been beaten before?' Says McKinley rather surprised.

'Yes. But they din't count on the Librarian stopping them in their tracks. That's why the five of us are so loyal to her. These five girls we are saving are going to be the ones that bring the Kryptos back and restore harmony to this planet.'

'Can I join the Kryptos?'

'That's for the Librarian to decide.'

'Well I better prove my worth now. Let's go and raise a ruckus' says McKinley all geared up.

Just then McKinley sees something move from the corner of his eye and before he could react the Reaper jumps at McKinley knocks him to the ground while drawing his gun and firing. 

The Reaper then stands up properly and offers McKinley his hand and helps him to his feet. McKinley turns and sees the crumpled body of a crocoserpent.

'Thanks Reaper.'

'All part of being a team. Now pay attention to your surrounding. It's going to be tough getting this kid. It looks like they are still searching for her.'

'No they've got her look' says McKinley pointing at 5 crocoserpents quietly peeling away from the group. The rest of them start to disperse.

'McKinley looks like they're preparing for a setup. Here's what I need you to do. I'm going after those five with the girl. I need you to create a diversion. I need 2 minutes to catch up with them. Your diversion needs to stop those five and give me a chance to take the baby. You think you can do that?'

'That should not be a problem at all.' McKinley runs off into the courtyard grabbing a small circular object from the Reaper as he runs past. 

The Reaper starts silently catching up with the five who have peeled away. He is almost on them when. Boooooommmmm

McKinley in the mean time had gotten into the courtyard and drawn all the attention to himself. The crocoserpents on seeing him start to converge onto him. McKinley pulls out a second object along with the circular object he took from the Reaper. He flings the circular object and just as the crocoserpents are about to reach him a flash of light appears and Boooooommmmm...

The five crocoserpents stop at the sound and turn just as 5 shots of lazer are fired knocking all 5 down. The Reaper runs to the baby and just as he's about to take the baby from the dead crocoserpent he hears a sound followed by a gurgling sound. He turns around to see McKinley with his FX trained at a crocoserpent who had a gun pointed at the Reaper.

'That was a close one wouldn't you say?' Says McKinley chuckling.

'Nice work McKinley. Good timing.'
He takes an object out of his pocket. 'Damn I love these mind controlled transporters.'

The Bloody Marys - Chapter 7


In the middle of the night at a small camping zone near Edith Falls part of Katherine Gorge in north Australia a lady goes into labour and the local doctor starts procedures to deliver the baby.

At that moment they hear a fluttering sound along with a flash of light. The doctor turns his attention back to the lady on the camping table. After a few minutes the doctor steps away with a wailing baby girl in his hand. Suddenly a hand appears on the shoulder of the doctor. He turns around and stares into the dark red eyes of a man pale as a ghost.

'Who are...' Starts the doctor.

'Give me the child and I shall let you live' says the pale faced man and he grabs the child. The mother and the doctor scream as the man pulls the child with a scowl. They see his fangs and shiver. Other figures start to appear around the pale man each equally pale in nature and with menacing fangs.

'Dekalis leave the child alone.' A voice rings across the room.

The pale man turns around to face the person who spoke. 'Ah Lady Mantis we meet again' says Dekalis
[Dekalis is the Lord of the Vampires. He is the strongest, the fastest and the most ferocious Vampire.]

'Do as the lady said Dekalis.' Says the Destructor.

Dekalis gives an evil grin and raises a hand. At the signal. The other Vampires converge on the trio. The trio open fire on them after switching their FX's to Ultra Violet blasts(Designed by the Scientist to take out Vampires as UV blasts were the only thing they couldn't survive). They drop down a number of Vampires when the Scientist notices Dekalis run away with the child.

'Mantis, Dekalis is getting away with the child' screams the Scientist.

Lady Mantis peals away charging after Dekalis with a number of Vampires following her.

The Scientist then shouts something out to the Destructor and pulls out a square shaped object and throws it into the air. The object emits a supersonic wave and then emits a bright light along with a high powered UV blast. The supersonic wave gives the Vampires in the area a numbing effect paralysing them in their tracks. The bright light and UV blast destroys the Vampires and turns them into ash.

The Scientist and Destructor look around them at all the ash around and smile at each other. Just as Lady Mantis comes charging over with a baby in her arm.

'Time to make a move boys' she screams.

The Scientist pulls out his transporter and a flash of light and smoke and then boom just as they see Dekalis leap into the air to try and reach them.

At the HQ of the Kryptos.

'How the hell did you manage to get the baby from Dekalis?' asks the Scientist.

'That supersonic wave of yours paralyzed him. I guess he was in range. Then I did what I was meant to do. Grab the kid and run like wind. I was surprised he dint catch me.'

Back in Australia when the smoke finally settles, Dekalis slaps the ground in frustration and looks up at the sky and screams.


The Bloody Marys - Epilogue


In the lantern lit room in the ancient citadel headquaters of the Kryptos 6 hooded figures gather around a fire. 

They stand on 6 spots in the ground. The robes are black and cover their faces.

'We have been successful in finding and getting the children. Now their training begins. Infants they maybe but they are not too young to start learning. So each of you knows your role so let's train the protectors of this planet. Fellow Kryptos I introduce you to' - she waves her hand and the eyes follow it to 5 cribs outside the circle 

'The Bloody Marys'


The End.

Wednesday, March 30, 2011

The Dead German - The Ending


Chapter 8

- Authors note: I wanted to try something new with my story so here it is. I have come up with 2 ending to The Dead German. Make sure you read the first 7 before you read this. I would like you the readers to decide which ending you want. You are welcome to read both endings and then decide which ending you would like to keep for the story. 

The endings are password protected so as not to reveal the ending till you click the links below to read it. The passwords are the same as the link. First Ending for the first link and Second Ending for the second link. Hope you enjoy the endings and please leave comments on what you think of the ending.

- Terror #1


First Ending

Second Ending

Friday, March 25, 2011

The Dead German

No offense meant to anybody. I thought this was a cool title and so that's why the name stuck. This story is dedicated to The Phoenix who gave me the idea for this story. Please check out epicmagazine.webs.com an online magazine started by her and a friend. 


This story is going to be slightly different from the rest in terms of style of story telling and reading. You will find out what I mean as you go along. Please do leave me comments as I would like to know if this sort of story telling is something I should continue or not. Thanks.



Chapter 1


Whoosh.

A strong gust of wind rips through the night.

A lonely house in the middle of a forest emits a ghostly aura. The wind howls as it grows stronger. The windows of the house begin rattling and a few that are open bang against their frames.

In the stillness of the night, a lone figure creeps through the dark corridors of the house. The moonlight casts strange shadows on the walls of the house as the figure creeps upstairs.

The wooden floors creak slightly under the feet of the stealthy shadow. The shadow reaches the landing and heads to the door on the left.

A gloved hand touches the door knob. The door opens noiselessly and the figure enters the room silently.

Straight ahead is a bed with a figure sprawled across it. The figure stirs. “Adolf ish thaat yu?” asks the prone form with a heavy German accent.

Silence.

“Eh. Vhaat ish ith?” the figure questions again. More silence. Utter darkness and absolute silence.



Chapter 2


The sun is shining down brightly. A cool wind sweeps by. A black BMZ Z4 cruises down the road, winding its way up the mountain. The car turns off the main road onto a mud road. It skids to a halt next to a black and white squad car. Silence falls as everybody turns to the car.

The door opens. A black high heel touches the ground. Out steps a lady in her late 20's. She's wearing a black dress with a pair of aviators. Her blonde hair falls neatly onto her shoulders. She pushes her hair back as she shuts the door. She takes off her shades and puts on a pair of frameless glasses as she walks to the door of the house. Heads turn as she walks by.

A man at the door stops her. She flashes a badge. Captain Veronica Velasquez. I'm with homicide and this is my crime scene and it had better not be contaminated. The man steps back and lets her through.

Veronica storms into the house and begins going over the area. She starts up the stairs as she hears a lot of talking. She walks into the room on the left. Wow, somebody sure as hell didnt want that motherfucker alive. 

Heads in the room turn in her direction. A burly man grunts at her, Who the fuck are you and what the fuck you doing here? This aint fashion week.

Veronica lets the snide remark pass. Well, wise guy. If you had some intelligence and reading capacity, you would have gone through the memo given yesterday and you'd know that I'm your fucking pain-in-the-ass boss. What the fuck is your name?

The burly man scowls and says, Antoine.

Antoine, why don't you be a good boy and go fetch me a cup of coffee? By the way, lads, does anybody else want coffee?

Veronica looks around the room. Oh, well, I guess that's just one coffee. Regular without sugar and little cream. Get moving.

Antoine moves out of the room rather sheepishly.

Veronica turns to the others in the room. Anybody else wants to act cocky? If you do, you'll join Antoine in odd-job duty. Good, glad I made myself clear.

She turns to the centre of the room. Now, what do we have here? She walks up to the bed.
My, the killer knew what he was doing. He has cut the jugular perfectly. It was instant death. There seems to have been a slight struggle. Where's the ME?

An elderly looking man walks up to her. That would be me, he says with a southern drawl.

So, was I right, doc?

Yeah, you were, detective. The slice to the neck is perfect. Its somebody trained in combat or with a medical background.

Go on. Was the slice of the jugular the cause of death?

Yeah, the COD was the cut to the jugular. The stab marks you see everywhere else were done postmortem.

Looks like a crime of passion, says a Crime Scene Investigator who is inspecting the body.

Who was the first on scene?

That would be the maid. She came in to change the sheets and found the body like this, says the CSI man as he turns towards the body.

By the way, CSI, what's your name? questions Veronica.

Gabriel Scores. CSI Level 5 at your service.

Good. Gabriel Scores 0 in the guessing motive for murder. Firstly, he was killed by a left-handed man. The depth of the slice indicates the assailant was a man. Doc, stop me if I'm wrong.

You have estimated it correctly. See the curve under his chin? That is done only when attacked by a male assailant...

Sorry to interrupt, Doc. But does anybody know who the hell this guy is?

His name on his drivers license says he's Toon (pronounced Tawn) Hitler, replies Antoine as he walks in with a cup of coffee.

Veronica turns around, takes the coffee and starts walking out of the room. Thanks for the coffee and guys keep me posted on everything.

She leaves the room. Gabriel heaves a sigh of relief. A friend of mine, who worked under her in her previous department, said she's called the Black Mamba because she wears black and is dead scary.

'I'm also called the Blood Hound and the Feisty Bitch. No idea why I'm not called the Black Widow though, says Veronica as she re-enters the room.

Doc, what's the estimated time of death?

I'd say around 12 am.


Chapter 3


Back at the station Veronica storms into her office. She flings her mobile at the wall behind her desk. A junior officer enters the office at the same moment.


'I guess its not a good time to come' says the officer.

'What's your name?'

'Marley'

'Marley. Sorry come in. I'm just pissed off because the damn victim was a German citizen and now I have to fucking work with some dick from the German Staatspolizei.'

'Uhm ma'am'

'I don't want some damn blonde prick who's got his nose up in the air sniffing my behind like a dumb doberman.'

'Captain'

'Yeh Marley, what is it? Speak. You sound like a stuttering fool'

'What he's trying to say is, the dick from the German Staatspolizei is here' says a young man with salt and pepper colored hair.

'By the way I'm detective Martin Hasselhoff and I'm sorry I'm not blonde'

'Uhmm Captain Veronica Velasquez. Don't look to me for an apology it won't come your way. Till you prove me differently you will be what I said you'd be.'

'Not looking for one and it's ok what you think. I'm good at my job so that itself should sort you out'

'What can I get you coffee?' Veronica spits out trying to be formal and polite. The frustration of having a foreign agent tagging along shows on her face.

'Hey Veronica, I don't like the fact I have to work with you. I work best alone but I've been made to work with you so don't act like you're the only martyr. I'll have a coffee.'

'Ok great. Marley get us some coffee. Now Martin sit and tell me what I need to know'



Chapter 4


Veronica walks into the squad briefing room followed by Martin. The officers stop chatting and look to the 2 senior officers who have walked in. Veronica walks up to the front where the suspects board has been arranged.

'Ladies and gentleman. I'd like to introduce you to Martin Hasselhoff. He's with the Staatspolizei. He will be helping us with the case of Mr. Hitler'

A ripple of laughter fills the room.

'Yeh yeh. This ain't a laughing matter people. We have a dead foreign national on our hands. We don't have time to sit laughing at his name. Now I want all the information I can get on this Toon Hitler. I want to know where exactly he's from, what his favorite food is, how many meals and who his last fuck was. From the looks of things, it seems pretty obvious that he was in that cottage for a roll in the sack. I want to know who was with him in that bed and if he fucked her. She's either our prime suspect or the last person to see him last.'

Antoine raises his hand 'Captain if I may?'

'Oh if it isn't Mr. Shall I get a cup of coffee.' Laughter bursts in the room. 'Ssshhh people. Antoine what is it?'

'I had gone through our police database and checked the immigration records. There's no sign of this guy Toon Hitler. He's a ghost.'

'That's interesting. Captain Hasselhoff would you be able to get information about this Toon Hitler?' Veronica turns to Martin as she says this.

'I think I should be able to get this information to you in an hours time.'

'Good. Now people its time we get a move on cos every minute we waste the killer moves farther away and the trail will start to get cold. I aint letting the son of a bitch who did this get away.'



Chapter 5


'Shit. Oh bloody shit. This can't be happening'

'What the hell is it Martin?' Exclaims Veronica.

'I just got off the phone with my people. That guy Toon Hitler. He's an undercover agent with the German SS'

'The SS? I thought that died with Hitler. Wait a minute Hitler - Hitler damn that's ironic.'

'This is a different SS. This is Germany special elite force. They are called the Secret Society in Germany. It consists of various military, air force, navy, commandos. You name it they've got it. They are supposed to be trained assassins and are the best in Europe for infiltration.'

'Man that's crazy'

'Yeh Veronica it is. It is rumored that they even have invisible cars like the one in James Bond'

'Martin you really expect me to believe all this shit you're laying out to me?'

'Veronica it aint shit. These guys do exist and they are very much real humans. If you have a dead agent you're in a whole load of shit. The guys who did this knew he was on their trail. If this guy got knocked then the guys he was after are extremely dangerous.'

'Just what I need. My first case after transferring here and it seems to me like I've landed myself in a pile of bull shit.'

'Well you have me. He is after all German so our resources will be at your disposal.'

'Gee thanks Martin, that's amazing' Veronica practically spits the words out.

Martin senses her sarcasm and turns and walks away.

Veronica storms out the room after him. She walks into the briefing room to find her team waiting for her. She walks up to the evidence wall stick a photo of the victim on it. Turns to the gathering. Meet Toon Hilter. The Dead German.



Chapter 6

'Take her to the interrogation room. I'll be there soon.'

Veronica turns to Martin. 'You want to join me? We got a girl who said she met Toon yesterday.'

'Lead on Veronica.'

Veronica and Martin walk into the interrogation room and sit opposite a young girl in her early 20's.

Veronica takes the lead. 'So Miss Penny Miller. You said you were with Toon.'

'Who the hell is that?'

Veronica slides a photo across the table.

'That's Gunther. Such a shame.'

'Why is that?'

'He's hot but he's gay as hell.'

'What?'

'Look at this body. Do you think any guy can resist this?' She turns to Martin. 'Am I right officer?' She winks at Martin.

'She does have a point. She's really good looking.' Says Martin smiling at Penny.

'Cut the flirting you two. So Penny can you tell us anything else about him?'

'Well I was proved right because when I spoke to him he said he was waiting for his boyfriend.'

'Did he speak about his boyfriend?' Asks Martin.

'He could not stop talking about his boyfriend.' Replies Penny.

'Did he mention a name?' This time Veronica asks the question determined not to let Martin take control of the investigation.

'His name was Adolf something. Not...'

Veronica interrupts her. 'Did you get to meet him?'

'No I didn't get to meet him. Although I did see his back. Seemed well built like an army guy.'

'Is there anything more you can tell us about either men?' Enquires Veronica who is starting to get frustrated.

'Nope sorry.'

'Okay Penny you are free to leave.'

Penny gets up and walks to the door. She suddenly turns back to Veronica. 'Oh I forgot something...' She stares at Veronica and Martin.

'What is it Penny?' Ask Veronica.

Penny turns to Martin. 'You were the guy Gunther met. I remember that scar on your neck. I saw it on the guy he walked off with.'


Chapter 7


Veronica slams the door shut and turns around. 'Martin we can do this the easy way or the hard way. Which is it going to be?'

Martin looks at Veronica. 'Ok I owe you and explanation. I'm Agent Adolf Vader. I'm an undercover agent with the German SS.'

'What the fuck?'

'Toon was on my team. He was here in the US tracking a big drugs and arms smuggling ring that's been operating out of Germany. He called and asked me to come saying he had sensitive information'

'So then why is he dead and did he give you the information?' Grills Veronica.

'No we met at the bar and then went to his place. I stepped out to buy some alcohol. When I got back he was dead. I...I...'

'You are an officer of the law. You should have reported it.' Says Veronica clearly trying to hide her disgust.

'He's German SS and I'm undercover too. I couldn't risk the operation. You should know that.'

Veronica shrugs and turns her back on Martin.

'I was given instructions from command center to join your investigation as one of my aliases. Hence Martin Hasselhoff' continues Martin.

'So what do I call you? Martin or Adolf or some other name?' Asks Veronica.

'Adolf.'

'Ok Adolf. I'm just stepping out of the interview room for a bit don't think about fleeing the scene.'

'I won't'

She walks out of the room. Suddenly CSI Gabriel comes running up to Veronica.

'You gotta come see this now.'

'Gabriel I have no time for nonsense. What is it?'

'Captain, you need to come see this. It's sensitive data. For your eyes only'

She follows Gabriel to the strategy room. She sees the ME and a whole bunch of computers.

'Captain I suggest you shut the door for what you're about to see.'

Veronica shuts the door and turns to the gathering. 'So tell me. Why am I here?'